Scenes

Morning. Hannah stares at the ceiling of their bedroom. The far pillow is still indented. Will is there (or has just been). Quiet domestic intimacy — easy, practiced.

Squash court. Hannah hammers the ball into the wall. LILY snaps it back — fast, competitive. Between rallies, Lily asks what's wrong. Hannah deflects. Lily probes about Will and the blackouts. Hannah shuts it down but she's visibly improved at squash.

Night street. Hannah walks out checking her phone. JULIA emerges from the shadows. "Hi." They walk together.

Night. Hannah and Julia on a park bench, voices low. Julia says Josh was afraid this afternoon. They discuss Will — Hannah calls him a sociopath. Julia decides she wants to become a Traveller too: "Let's make sure I'm along for the ride." She takes Hannah's hand. "Think of what you're trying to save." THE HUM builds.

THE HUM fades. Hannah is in their bedroom, searching drawers and nightstand for Will's diary. She goes through piles of clothes, cupboards. Nothing. Then Will's silhouette fills the doorway. He found her.

Their bedroom. Will confronts Hannah — "Did you really think I wouldn't find out and travel back here?" Hannah: "It's too late. She's out there." Will reveals the diary isn't here. They argue about control, happiness, and what he's done to her life.

Their bedroom. Will and Hannah argue fiercely. "You turned my life to hell." "I saved you." "And then you changed everything." Will threatens: "If that's a problem, I can change it again. Oh. I just did."

Their bedroom. Will delivers a final warning to Hannah: "Consider it a warning." The power dynamic is clear.

Night. JULIA stumbles out of Josh's front door, crying. She nearly falls on the garden path. HANNAH catches her, steadies her. Julia is devastated.

Hotel room, morning. HANNAH and JULIA wake up — they've spent the night. A phone rings. The alarm clock reads 7:55.

Bar, evening. WILL and MAYA sit together in an alcove booth. HANNAH arrives and confronts Will. She's found him spending time with Maya. Tension and anger.

Domestic bliss? WILL and HANNAH in their kitchen. Will defends his actions — the life he built, the choices he made. Hannah pushes back.

Day. WILL grabs HANNAH's shoulder on the street. She pulls away. "You're an asshole." Short, sharp, physical beat.

City park. HANNAH at the spot where she first met Josh. WILL arrives. Josh is somewhere nearby. Three characters but the focus is Will and Hannah — their alliance is fracturing.

Bar. WILL slams HANNAH against the bar — physical altercation. JULIA notices from across the room and leaps up to help. Violence and intervention.

Grass hill at dusk. HANNAH alone — lost, distraught. "No, no." She sits in the fading light, at her lowest point.