Scenes

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Code Int/Ext Cast Time Length Shot state
1.13 Cafe Park EXT Julia Hannah Josh Day 3.0 Shot
City park café terrace. Tree shade, distant chatter. Hannah arrives in a rush, spots JOSH reading a book at a table, and sits across from him. She comments on his Flannery O'Connor novel. They flirt — easy, natural chemistry. She breaks down briefly; he kneels beside her. Then JULIA steps into the frame — striking, late twenties. She's Josh's girlfriend. Josh introduces Hannah. Julia notices Hannah looks shaken. Josh and Julia leave; Hannah forces composure until they're gone, then bolts.
1.14 Cafe Park EXT Hannah Will Day 1.5 Unshot
City park. Hannah storms away from the café terrace, hands clenched, breathing hard. Will calls her name (O.S.). She ignores him, quickens pace. He catches up, grabs her shoulder. She whirls around — "Don't touch me!" They argue: she says he lied about fixing things, he says they need to go further back. She's furious and desperate. "I WANT TO GO HOME!" THE HUM builds.
2.20 Cafe Park EXT Hannah Day 0.1 Unshot
Early light across the park. Hannah sits on a bench, still, letting the city move around her. In the distance, half-obscured by trees, Josh and Julia walk together — just two figures in motion. Hannah watches with acceptance.
3.19 Cafe Park EXT Graham Hannah Josh Will Day 1.1 Shot
FLASHBACK to the original park café meeting (same setting as 1.13). Tree shade dapples the terrace. HANNAH sits at a table. JOSH at another table, reading, smiling at her. WILL and GRAHAM watch from the trees at a distance. Graham confronts Will about creating chaos.
4.24 Cafe Park EXT Hannah Will Day 0.5 Unshot
City park. HANNAH at the spot where she first met Josh. WILL arrives. Josh is somewhere nearby. Three characters but the focus is Will and Hannah — their alliance is fracturing.