5.11 Street Clubbing

EXT. ALLEYWAY - NIGHT #11#

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Thomas Mook Manuel Lentz

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In the alley Naomi kisses Hannah as cover, then confesses she spotted her on-and-off ex.

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EXT. ALLEYWAY - NIGHT #11#

In the shadows, Naomi presses Hannah against the wall and kisses her. Quick, urgent, covering. Hannah pulls away.

HANNAH

What was that?

NAOMI

I thought...

HANNAH

Why did you pull me away?

NAOMI

I was trying to be romantic.

HANNAH

What are you not telling me?

NAOMI

(sighing)

I may just have spotted my girlfriend.

HANNAH

Girlfriend?

NAOMI

Ex-girlfriend. Kind of. On and off and on again.

HANNAH

Well, which one is it?

NAOMI

Right now, on... I think.

HANNAH

Wait, when we started dating, you told me—

NAOMI

It was off then.

HANNAH

And you didn't think to keep me updated on what else was going on in your life?

NAOMI

This stuff's a mess, Hannah! It's always a mess.

HANNAH

Is that what we are?

NAOMI

Don't be like that.

HANNAH

You lied to me.

NAOMI

It's not lying. It's omission.

HANNAH

That's just lying for people who can spell. So if I walk up to her right now, what's she gonna tell me?

NAOMI

Hannah, come on.

HANNAH

What's her name?

NAOMI

Sophie.

HANNAH

Perfect, thanks, I'll just start yelling.

She starts to walk, but Naomi yanks her back—

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INSERT – WILL shoving Hannah against the bar. THE HUM roars.

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Back in the alleyway, Naomi’s grip still on her arm. Hannah reels, breath caught. Something unseen clatters to the floor.

NAOMI

Babe? Babe.

Hannah's visibly distraught by the sudden jolt.

HANNAH

I'm going home.

NAOMI

Hannah.

HANNAH

Leave me alone.

She walks off.

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